Wings of Fire critic

Aureus (Degal_Heartfang)

Name: Aureus

Name Reasoning: 'Aureus' means yellow

(False, an 'aureus' is a gold coin used by Rome a realllllly long time ago. But overall It's a latin word meaning gold so it's close enough!)

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Tribe: SandWing

Sexuality: Heterosexual, Pansromantic

Rank: Leader of his father's gang (Gangster)

Occupation: Leader of a gangResidence: In the large SandWing village, Gila Town near the IceWing tundra and the Kingdom of Sand.

Looks: Aureus is a short, sharp, and slightly lean SandWing with a pale mustard yellow color. Has a white underbelly, wings, and a white barb. He has a few brown flecks on his shoulders, kind of like freckles on his shoulders, and on his forearms, snout, and along his wings. Has very dark hazel eyes with a black tattoo that swirls down along his cheeks and neck. His father's gang symbol is on his left wing (a camel spider) what he has tried to get off of him for a while now (carefully trying to rip just the tattoo). Has a small gold band on his forearm he rarely wears, given to him by Hare. Most say he doesn't look like he can fit in with his gang, mostly cause he has a baby face.

(Short sandwing, unusual considering how most are depicted as very tall! I like it! Otherwise I like his description he's a pretty interesting sounding sandwing, simple yet unique!)

Personality: To show he can fit in with his old gang, he was very careful yet aggressive, not to mention bossy. He was very determined and loud, mostly to get his point across and to show he was like his father. To Hare, he wasn't as aggressive, but was very irritated easily by her mindset on her only being a low life, only to be molded into serving him. He is known to be the apple of his mother's eye, cause of his mature nature and mindset. He is very much against underage drinking, underage intimacy, and heavily against racism. Loves music with nearly all of his heart, when he was younger though.  

(He sounds like a tough love sort of dragon, and would it be tribism?? I love how you explain his personality though I would of added how he's very headstrong and heart strong, a trait shown in his backstory.)

Abilities: Fire breath, heated scales, barb tail, can camouflage into the desert sand well. Normal SandWing things.  

Strengths: Fighting, acting tough, talking in front of others, leadership skills (still working on it though)  

Weakness: Not the most calmest of dragons, very competitive, says way too many bad words, even for a gangster.

(So what you're saying is he has flaws and can't always hold up under the pressure, adding a layer of depth to his character? Awesome! Also how much can I make if I use the swear jar on him-)

Likes: Sun bathing, music, Hare, he has devilled in drawing before, even though he's not very good at it.

It's interesting to have a character that likes something even if they aren't good at it. Likes defiantly don't have to be limited to just things characters are good at.)

Dislikes: His singing voice, to much cold, his dad, getting accused of things he didn't do.  

Family Mother: Eve (a plant found in the desert) - a sandy yellow SandWing that is covered head to toe in jewelry, with very dark brown eyes. Had very long horns, almost like devil horns. Dead. He appreciates her for teaching me how to read and write. Father: Camel Spider (Spider) - a pale brownish-yellow SandWing with a mangled back right leg, wears a pair of camel spider earings, and a spider necklace. Has dark forest green eyes. Dead. Didn't really care for him. Brother: Roadrunner - a dusty brown, tall, chubby SandWing with a pale yellow underbelly. Had dark brown eyes. Dead. Found him annoying.