Name: Riftcatcher
That's unique I like it!
Name reason: She was unique and strange, so they gave her a name that fit her
Don't see how Riftcatcher would be strange but alright....
Age: 5
Gender: Female ((like meeeeeee))
Sexuality: straight ((Idek wut I am))
Tribe(s): Night, Silk
Cool combo!
Time period/era: about 40 years after the sandwing war ended
Occupation: Nightwing spy, Gold Winglet
Spy? For who? Queen Glory? Why would she need a spy? Where'd she get the training and why'd she want to be a spy? Why bother joining the academy?
Looks: A Nightwing But with no wings, instead she has four buds in their place. She has cold-gray curved horns, red pupiless eyes((by that I mean she has a white oval in the middle of her iris where her pupil should be))purple spines, black scales with a cold-gray underbelly. A black Forked tounge, a pair of purple, short and small antenna on her eye ridges. She has a pair of tear-scales that are bigger than Faitspeaker's but smaller than Moonwatcher's. She is a tiny bit skinny and has an icewing-like stature. A golden-chain necklace with a pale-purple moonstone pendant on it.
BLACKANDREDOCNOOO *coughs* I mean why would she be anything like an IceWing? That makes no sense since she's a NightWing Silkwing and neither of them share a similar stature to an IceWing....otherwise she sounds cool!
Personality: likes to argue, tears up easily when yelled at, can be sarcastic at times but can be very serious when needed. Rather quiet when she is with strangers and without her friends or family, likes to say weird thing sometimes and occasionally says a depressing or creepy thing or sentence but plays it of as a joke.Is more of a bystander than someone who intervenes But is rather supportive , nice, funny and will fight for her friends if she's forced. ((Basically me))
I like the detail to her personality, and how she's not the overused 'nice and friendly and nothing else'. but you didn't bother to mention her 'lack of innocence' from her backstory.
Abilities: she has a variation of mind-reading , ((that's why she has tear-scales))that she calls "Sight-seeing", can feel vibrations but she only notices them if she thinks about them which is rare.
....care to explain what Sightseeing is and how it works? No..? Righty then.... no other abilities either besides the physical capabilities....
Strengths: she's a bit smarter than other Nightwing dragonets her age, she is also trustworthy
Why's she trustworthy and how does she show it? Are hybrids more trusted by now?
Weaknesses: she can't fly, is practically blind ((can still see, but not the way she's used to)) if her necklace is stolen or lost, she sometimes has thoughts that contradict other thoughts and then she gets really confused and wears a blank expression, being a bystander. Very little fire.
A few good weaknesses, awesome!
Family: Nightshade- Riftcatcher's mother. A Nightwing with hints of red, yellow and purple in her wings, cold-gray underbelly. Dark green eyes. Died protecting Riftcatcher and Cryptid.Somber- Riftcatcher' father. A Nightwing Animus with blue spines, blue star-scales, a blue-green underbelly. Red eyes.Cryptid- Riftcatcher's Older brother. Could read minds. A Nightwing with light-gray scales, white spines and a black underbelly. Electric Blue eyes. Died when Riftcatcher was 3.
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AventuraIt's been revamped! In this book I'll be reviewing people's wings of fire ocs, noticed a few different review books and sadly not a lot of them were active. So I've decided to make my own! Hope you'll find it useful for building your oc!
