Hello everyone I have decided to revive this book. Since I've last critiqued, which for the record was back in October 2019, I've gotten much better at making, designing and writing original characters. I've also gotten much better at critiquing them. I know a thing I struggled with in the past when giving feedback was sugarcoating, so for this time around I have told myself that I will not be doing that.
While the cover still says Warrior Cats on it, for now I want to stick to Wings of Fire. Everything I've given feedback on before I won't delete in case the posters for whatever reason come back here to look at their stuff.
Anyways here are the rules.
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• Please no linking or tagging! You have to submit your form here in the comments.
•No joke-ocs.
•You may send more then one character, but please don't spam me with every character you got all at once.
•Don't worry if you can't fit the entire form into one comment, use as many replies as necessary! Seriously, the more the better.
•I'll be rating your oc from 1-10 based on originality and creativity, detail and effort, realism (how plausible the character is) and how well they keep me interested. Please note that personally, I am a stickler for canon lore, so if your oc goes against canon a bunch maybe don't submit them here.
-These are my honest opinions (yes opinions, the biggest swear word on the Internet) and yes, I am very blunt about them. I will however explain all my reasoning, so don't worry you aren't just going to get a 'your oc sucks lol', I'll tell you why I don't think the oc is good should I think the oc is not a good character. But yes, overall you will be receiving constructive criticism. That being said I'm not the Wings of Fire god, you are entirely free to take all my feedback and toss it if you don't like it.
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Name:
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Age:
Gender:
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Time Peroid/Era:
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Looks:
Personality:
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Strengths:
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Likes:
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Family:
Friends:
Crush/mate:
Dragonets:
Backstory:
Others:
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Wings of Fire critic
PertualanganIt's been revamped! In this book I'll be reviewing people's wings of fire ocs, noticed a few different review books and sadly not a lot of them were active. So I've decided to make my own! Hope you'll find it useful for building your oc!
