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Review#1: Hey, Death

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by huzailazahid

by huzailazahid

Book: Hey, Death
By: _Twisted_Roses_
Genre: Fantasy
Rating: 4.0/5

REVIEW:

I liked Hey, Death a lot specially the cocky attitude of Death and an interesting plot.

The grammar is good and simple hence, easy to understand and I love the quotations you write on top of your chapters, makes the opening of chapters interesting.

I have given you four stars because the timeline of the story does not matches with the actions of the characters. It is 2050, a future with great technology or if not, then why? You should show what is the world outside their school and why is their school so strict and strange.

Just try to develop your characters a little further. I mean, I get it, Tella is a cool personality but if you find a man sitting in your dorm with violet eyes, well, you creep out, maybe just a little, but you do creep out.

The Death's personality is pretty much obvious and hence well-developed.

The story is good, as you already know. The endings of the chapters need just a slight but of work but overall, it's interesting and new.

Thank you for writing it.

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huz