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Review#22: The Knight and a Peasant

Title: The Knight and a Peasant
By: SirTurtletheIII
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 17
Status: On-going
Score: 4.6/5

REVIEW:

Cover:

I hate to start my review with rejection but I don't like your cover. The picture is related and cool, but the font does not suit it much. You can find a lot of pictures of knights on Unsplash so it is not really hard and try to keep the pixels of picture of wattpad constant.

Description:

It is a pretty interesting description. The kind of description that makes you say, "Come here, darling,'

Dunno about others but I say it to all the books which descriptions I like. It is a small description, to the point, and playing a fantastic role in piquing one's interest.

Plot:

An amazing fantastic plot with bewildering twists and turns and lively characters is at your service.

The book is planned well. You know what you are writing and what you want to convey and this is what matters the most. The way you have portrayed a peaceful world for Salvador when he is nothing and a chaotic world when he is something is beautiful. Your world is crafted well—the rules, the laws, the higher classes, the lower ones, all are described effectively. The respect in their language is fascinating too. Though I will say that it will be better is you explain the characters and places a little more. When I didn't know what was what and who was who, I didn't understand stuff and hence, it got boring. At least tell us in a one lines or so. It will be pretty helpful.