#1 in Reviews. (23 Aug, 2019)
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'Here, this is the book I have written. Please give it a read and tell me if it needs any improvement.' John hands his book to his best friend, Nate.
'Sure, mate,' Nate takes the book. 'I would love t...
Title: A Fall To Hell By: AutumnalStories Genre: Fantasy Chapters: 15 Status: On-going Score: 4/5
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REVIEW:
Cover:
Eh ... nah. You could do so much better. The font needs to be changed and the sub title does not seem attractive. Try to not use the stroke. It gives unprofessional look. The picture behind is good though.
Description:
It is interesting but too long and confusing. It does need to be this long, you know. You can just keep till "abandoned by God" and cut the rest or if you want to add a dialogue, try to add a simple and interesting one. The one that you have given us is too complicated. We are not from that world. We are strangers so we would read something we understand.
Plot:
It is a beguiling plot with random twists here and there. I like the pace; not too fact nor too slow. You have given the story the deserved time and I was so happy when I read it. The world is described well, not information-dumps, not too short nor too long chapters... a really well done.
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Characters Development:
I like your characters but I think they can use some work.
Me:
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