As the title said it's just a test about if your OC is a Mary Sue, anyways send in your OC in the comments to determine if it is a Mary Sue or not.
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I am okay with any fandoms as majority of Gary Sue and Mary Sue are much similar, I am...
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So I will be attaching the story summary later and will be evaluating the story itself. So from the overall character design and names it's all well thought out, I assume from the story itself the story is set in the past ages. To be honest, the past ages have more room to wiggle regarding young ages since people in the past have been courting when they are not even half adult yet. For her appearance I like it a lot since it seem perfect, I like how she changed when she moved to other areas. Her appearance isn't the best and that's what smooth out a character. I don't see any major problems that needs to be point out so I will continue with the story summary.
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So I like the setting and there's nothing I could say. From what we know, Lillian is a Dragon in this magical universe, I like how the animal depend on the person itself, their strengths and personality.
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I like the story a lot! It seemed reasonable and it shape herself as a character, she is forcing herself to be one of the gossip in court in order to fit in and protect her place. The prince, wants the throne and naturally he is doing the same. It seems like the story is even better with the character, and for the character ideas I wouldn't be complaining a lot. I looked forward to seeing them shape out because the characters seems very interesting.
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So I like her personality and strengths, etc, it seemed very reasonable and defines her story summary. I would suggest for the stats to at least have another below 5, since as earlier explained 5/10 means you are good at it but not super. Anywhere over means you have experience over this field. Below 5/10 means you understand it, but you aren't the best person regarding it.
!over all she is one of the best characters I've seen! I really like to hear her story in Sethons. But there's just small changes, and I look forward to her relationship status!
!yall don't go ham on me because of my review, it's only their for you to reference!
