As the title said it's just a test about if your OC is a Mary Sue, anyways send in your OC in the comments to determine if it is a Mary Sue or not.
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I am okay with any fandoms as majority of Gary Sue and Mary Sue are much similar, I am...
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Once again, this is fairly short. Starting form the top, you have your personal fandom. You might consider giving some context as it is important to judge your fandom as well as your character. So for the name/basic information section, there isn't any big problem but you offered a really vague image of your character. And from the slight look, you need to add more details. More context, which is actually the main problem here. So— For example, his family. Give some context of his family. What do they do, what are them in Taylor's eyes. Such as:
Character: Mariana Lewis Carol (cat)- Carol is Mariana's cat, she consider Carol a good friend and a stress reliever on a hard day. Even though taking care of Carol is a lot of work, Mariana really enjoys the company that is offered to her in the process.
For the appearance, you can talk about Taylor's skin color, his clothes. For example:
Clothes: Mariana wears a red beanie over her head, she have rectangular glasses that she wears every day. Mariana doesn't like dress a lot and she is a sucker for jeans, she often wears ripped jeans with a red polo shirt and nice, red, white, black, striped jacket. She also wears high brown boots along side with a golden bracelet on her right wrist.
Personality. An interesting problem here is that you didn't actually introduced any personality. You just added a fact that he is a nice guy and that he doesn't kill living things. What does nice means to you? Break it down a bit. For example:
Mariana is a nice girl, she is relevantly respectful and treats everyone with manners. She encourages herself to make the people around her to feel comfortable, she often like to make witty jokes and is always a person to count on! However, she gets irritated easily, usually when stressed she doesn't like to interact with anyone and would often shrug the other person off with a harsh tone, but do not take it seriously as she is just in a need of a rest.
Next up for backstory. Who is Machi? If any items impact your character it is crucial to add details and give context. For his backstory it's really awfully vague, you didn't expose a lot in his personality. Normally a backstory and personality would work together to create a character, however there isn't a lot to work with here. It doesn't reveal much of his family member, friends, etc. A backstory is the biggest chunk of your character, it should reveal more, makes your character unique.
For weakness, you probably need to have a big weakness that could affect him deeply.
I am not going through everything, but I hope you get my point here. I imagine you probably thought of the character off your head without going through specific details, it's fine! However every OC would need some details.
This could be interesting and made into a great fiction story, but we need to add on to the character. Alright, that's it! Thanks for submitting.
Overall! This is a character in need of some work!
