Review: 12 Mistress_Mitsukai

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I have a long one today!
Thank you for 1k reads by the way, before we continue I just want to say I am on low response as of now! Please be mindful of that. Now, let's get going!

  Great! This OC seems very interesting, I love the personality

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Great! This OC seems very interesting, I love the personality. I think it works perfectly. I have no comments here whatsoever.

For the weakness, instead of saying he is protective of his sister, a better way to cover entirely may be that he reach out to any solutions possible without thinking and evaluating if it is right or wrong

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For the weakness, instead of saying he is protective of his sister, a better way to cover entirely may be that he reach out to any solutions possible without thinking and evaluating if it is right or wrong. And then the e.g. because it will cover more widely among that.

I do not have any comments regarding his relationship within his family, I think it works pretty well

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I do not have any comments regarding his relationship within his family, I think it works pretty well.

 His connection seems pretty interesting with his friends, I do not have comments so let's move on!

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His connection seems pretty interesting with his friends, I do not have comments so let's move on!

His backstory is a great base, I do understand it isn't every single detail however it covers perfectly and I find it great! His skills seems balanced and yet this is definitely one of best and most interesting OC I've ever seen!

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His backstory is a great base, I do understand it isn't every single detail however it covers perfectly and I find it great! His skills seems balanced and yet this is definitely one of best and most interesting OC I've ever seen!

Overall! I love this OC, he seems more down to earth, hopefully his character development could be expressed!

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