As the title said it's just a test about if your OC is a Mary Sue, anyways send in your OC in the comments to determine if it is a Mary Sue or not.
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I am okay with any fandoms as majority of Gary Sue and Mary Sue are much similar, I am...
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Okay, first great name! I quite enjoy the universe, it seems different from what I've seen in the past. I like her personality, it isn't often used and it seems cool. For her relationship status, I will identify it after I've read the backstory. So far I don't have any major problems.
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-This is a unique backstory, though I believe I need more details. I realized this story was supposed to be long but you shorten it down, for example, why did war becoming common push Clemence's status down? Why was Clemente a jerk? How did she go broke and how does this work? This is a great story base to be honest, but really just need a dash of details. And I still didn't understand her relationship, does it affect her person in anyway, probably need to go into more details. Since I only know they adopted her. A good way to find it is just looking over your base and adding reasons to the causes of after events, it will make it more reasonable. -I like her strength, it seemed reasonable and her weakness seemed too. It really depends since I believe your character can use a bit more strength and weakness. If you are looking for ideas, using a major weakness plus a major strength is a good way to balance out your character. -Her likes seemed reasonable also her dislikes. Though, like I've said, it could use a bit more. -For the ratings I think it's not horrible, but I consider lowering a bit down. I don't understand her agility and strength but I completely understand her smart.
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Alright, cool! I like her static energy thingy, it really was one of those unique traits a lot of authors don't have!
Overall! I like it, though it could use a bit more details but Camisha is a great character! It just need a bit more adding, she is really unique. Maybe considering the backstory needs a boost! Anyways! I like her a lot!
!This is only my opinion, please don't go ham on me if you didn't like what I've said!
