As the title said it's just a test about if your OC is a Mary Sue, anyways send in your OC in the comments to determine if it is a Mary Sue or not.
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I am okay with any fandoms as majority of Gary Sue and Mary Sue are much similar, I am...
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(Sorry I took a long hiatus, I am trying to figure out a schedule soon!")
Alrighty, it's a pleasure to be reviewing your OC and thank you for sending it in! Old Font Rules here: Important Important ———
Mental Health: I going to stabbed this section in at the very beginning, I want to make this clear that mental health is by far one of the hardest aspects to execute in any OCs. Borderline Personality Disorder is far deeper than what you protrayed. here. BPD are known to have abandonment issues, unstable emotions, extreme mood swings, etc, that would affect their real life. They might make risky changes like going out of a good relationship, BPD victims are far deeper. The disorder feels more like a tool here to power what you wished for Lilith in an OC which is quite common among CP OCs, so no worries, try changing a point of view and considering BPD as a part of Lilith's identity, not her entirely,but a part of it. It's rather you need to draw a clear outline on how it impacted, changed, affected herself and people around here, her perceptions on her disorder. ———————— Background story: It's rather vague. Though I did an understanding, we can only experience Lilith constant outrage, you might want to impact on that more like what she thinks of it, her thoughts. In many ways your backstory doesn't really lead up to her Creepypasta self, her abilities? Does she live in the mansion? Saying it simply, the story needs a bit of connection work. For instance: Who killed her parents and why? How did it affect her deeply, emotions, how did she tried to cope with it? What was her relationship with her parents that made her happy. We do have a vague idea of where we are headed, but the execution process needs a tat bit of work. ———- Appearance : Since I don't have a lot information here anyways, how did she earned her scar? Could it be tied into her background story? ——
Alright, I won't go over a lot here.
Overall, This OC could use a bit more work. We definitely have an idea, but it's everywhere, try tying different aspects together: relationship impacts background story. Background story impacts her personality. But thank you very much for submitting!
