As the title said it's just a test about if your OC is a Mary Sue, anyways send in your OC in the comments to determine if it is a Mary Sue or not.
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I am okay with any fandoms as majority of Gary Sue and Mary Sue are much similar, I am...
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Thank you for submitting! If you are looking forward to submitting, please submit one the first chapter. It could be a pain trying to find all the submissions, anyways let's begin! And is the fandom 魔道祖师？
So for the relationship and the appearance it appears vague. I am a bit skeptical about the fandom since there aren't many information given but I would let that slip, however the relationship needs more information. Side characters is extremely important, the appearance also needs some work. Such as what clothes she wears. Besides from that I am alright so let's continue! I do not have big problems with her personality, it's actually quite nice.
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Right, from the start. So with all these mysterious and unknown situations, it would be best if you actually offered an explanation. Don't worry though! A lot of people use unknown and mysterious as an excuse, however I do not suggest that. Besides all the some how's should definitely be changed. The story is kind of everywhere, the story could use a bit more details and you have all these events happening. It just seems a bit messy, what I suggest is trying to connect everything together and come up with something that is supported by details and reasonings. Everything seems so sudden for the story and there's so many events. Seems like her spiritual powers play a certain role here, maybe introduce it?
Alright, her dislikes, likes, strengths, and weakness are great!
Her stats are a bit high, Try adding. A 5 in there.
But her for her extras, I have huge problem with the memory loss. As I said, your story is everywhere, this should probably be mention in the backstory.
At the end the relationship did no impact, try connecting the backstory with the character's relationship.
!Overall! Your character do need some work. There's lack of detail and the backstory really needs some fixing, however I do enjoy this character!
