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Candlelight

ghostair (2/6)

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It perfectly matches the storyline as it is mentioned and explained later on.

- Does it reel you in?
At first glance it caught my attention with curiosity.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It was creative to see it match the story so well. In a way, it is unique. Especially if the title managed to give me a mix emotions before I started reading.
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It perfectly suited the storyline as it had the main character

- Is it attention grabbing?
It sure grabbed my attention

- Did it seem creative and unique?
Yes. It has a balance of both. You mentioned gaze in the summary so I can't help but think you purposely added Hoseok in like that.
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Very well suited

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
Its good. Not too little, not too much. However, you managed to fit two - three sentences that was perfect to reel me in. It all depends on the detail and the way you write it out.

- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
Yes. I loved it.
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
Yes it did flow very nicely. Well done

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
Yes, from the time the plot starts with the reader seeing Hoseok light those candles to the explanation of why he does it at the end

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It has a balance of creativity and uniqueness. It had that plot twist in the end which caught me off guard, but in a good way.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes I finished in one sitting
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
No not at all

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Yes. No errors whatsoever

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
It all made sense. I was able to enjoy the book with no errors once again
Score: (10/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
As the story progresses their roles become more clear. It mostly focused on Hoseok but yes his part in the story was crystal clear.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
Yes. There were no pointless dialogue. It was just the main points that were said. I even felt all of that emotion coming from Hoseok.
Score: (5/5)

Total: (50/50)
To be honest, I don't know how you do it but wow it's amazing. Your writing and thought you put into it is just beautiful. Great Job

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