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Behind The Smile

ghostair (6/6)

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It perfectly weaves into the storyline

- Does it reel you in?
It does reel me in. I became curious by the title alone

- Did it seem creative and unique?
Yes it did
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It perfectly fit with the storyline as it had a main characters

- Is it attention grabbing?
It immediately caught my attention before reading the book.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It is unique with the amount of color. It isn't too much nor too less and looks clean
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Very well suited

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
If anybody tells you that your summary is too short, don't listen. It's just right

- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
For it being two sentences it lured me in and hooked me into seeing the story more clearly.
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
Yes it did flow very nicely

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
The story is not completed yet but yes it does include all elements from start to the rising plot

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It has a balance of creativity and uniqueness. I really enjoyed having enough detail to picture everything and to have it well paced

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes I finished in one sitting
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
Very few

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very few marks were missing at some points

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
It all made sense which I really like. There were only a few spelling mistakes and extra spaces but it did not impact the clarity of the paragraphs
Score: (8/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were introduced nicely. We were given a bit insight of what Namjoon and how he acts as he is a father.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
Yes they did. The conversations kids had with each other were hilarious at some parts
Score: (5/5)

Total: (48/50)

This story is not done yet and I am very excited to see what'll happen next. I like how adorable the kids seem and how the details that were provided made everything clear. However, for the errors, there were very few. I want to say at least three or four mistakes in mostly spelling. Amazing job with keeping me hooked into this Namjin story.

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