Dear Heart Why Him?

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gullywasher

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It does suit the storyline very nicely. I love it
- Does it reel you in?
Yes, It did reel me in. I loved the connection to the book as well. It isn't seen as often as well.
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
Yes it is
- Did it seem creative and unique?
I love the sufficient amount of color. It seemed very interesting  and eye catching, along with the main character included
Score: (5/5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Yes it did suit the story but seemed a bit short, not giving me enough information of the story.
- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
It was pretty short to actually keep me hooked but it did seem interesting which is good
Score: (4/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It did flow smoothly and well.
- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
It isn't complete yet, however, it is obviously on its way to including all.
- Did it seem creative and unique?
It's different in a sense, but seems like a plot that I could imagine happening.
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
I didn't spot any major errors except for sentence structure. I understand if English isn't first language, if that's the case then it's fine However, sentences did seem a bit off and confusing as words were simply missing from its rightful place.
- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very very few were misplaced but it isn't much of a big deal.
- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
Again, it was a bit confusing to read and did throw off the sentencing by a tad bit.
Score: (8/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
I didn't get to fully understand and get to know the other characters as well as the main character but for first impressions, it was great.
-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
They all made sense which is great.
Score: (4/5)

Total: (46/50)
I have to say I enjoyed the overall look and contents of the book. The cover especially was very pleasing to look at and is really eye catching in my opinion. I did enjoy the vibe of the book and first impressions. It was a great journey and I hope to see more in the future! Great Job!

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