1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It does suit the storyline nicely. I like it
- Does it reel you in?
Yes, It did reel me in. I like the connection and the way it suits pretty well to the book but I see this title quite often.
Score: (4/5)
2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
The cover didn't really match the storyline but did have potential as it included a main character.
- Did it seem creative and unique?
It didn't seem as unique as it should be meaning, it is a bit plain and not as eye catching. What I mean by that is yes, it seems plain but the contributing factor was the main character being the main focus of the whole cover but not seeming to have any relation to the plot.
Score: (4/5)
3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Yes it did suit the story but seemed a bit short, not giving me enough information of the story.
- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
It was pretty short to actually keep me hooked s for some reason felt confusing but it did seem a bit interesting which is good
Score: (3/5)
4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It did flow fairly smoothly and well.
- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
It isn't complete yet, however, it is obviously on its way to including all.
- Did it seem creative and unique?
It's different in a sense, but seems like a plot that I could imagine happening.
Score: (20/20)
5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
I didn't spot any major errors except for sentence structure. I understand if English isn't first language, if that's the case then it's fine however, sentences did seem a bit off and confusing as words were simply missing from its rightful place.
- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very very few were misplaced but it isn't much of a big deal.
- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
Again, it was a bit confusing to read and did throw off the sentencing by a tad bit.
Score: (8/10)
6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
I didn't get to fully understand and get to know the other characters as well as the main character but for first impressions, it was great.
-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
They all made sense which is great.
Score: (4/5)
Total: (43/50)
Love the concept going on. I've read some similar plots but it is different in its own way. For the cover, I do like it but it just honestly does not seem to have that wow factor or simply the connection to the story as it should've had. It isn't a big deal though as it does include the character but I feel like it could use a bit more attention to the detail of the story itself. Great Job!
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