My World Isnt Yours

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hobiphobic

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
The title matches the storyline very well

- Does it reel you in?
Is says just enough about the book as a title alone. It's perfect.

  - Did it seem creative and unique?
Best part is that I haven't seen this title anywhere. It's both creative and unique.
  Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
The cover is well made and clean. It's simple but attractive and relevant.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
I have to say it is a bit simplistic but its well enough to catch my eye and compliment the title.
Score: (5/5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
It suits fairly well. It provided a bit of information to the plot without giving away too much

-Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
I agree it did reel me by curiosity.
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It did flow fairly well. It was perfectly paced.

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
So far, yes. It isn't completed but i like the way the story is slowly rising on its feet.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes it was. Every chapter seems to get even more appealing and alluring as I went through it. I can see the thoughts put into it. I loved it so far
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
There were grammatical errors but very few.

-Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Throughout the story there are simple misplacing of very few commas but nothing too major to take away from the story
Score: (9/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
Perfect

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
I liked their dialogue. It wasn't too much nor too less and had no pointless conversations.
Score: (5/5)

Total: (49/50)
   Amazing job with the book so far. You managed to hook me from chapter one and on. I actually got stuck reading through the book and read the whole thing in one sitting. That's pretty much all I can say just except for the small grammatical mistakes. Great work!

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