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Shattered

SharonAdams4

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
Yes it did. I liked the direct connection

- Does it reel you in?
It reeled me in by curiosity

- Did it seem creative and unique?
Yes I haven't seen any with that title and it gives a certain vibe
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
Yes it had the main character and also suited the story

- Is it attention grabbing?
Of course it is. It isn't edited or has too much add-ons to it. It's perfect

- Did it seem creative and unique?
Yes as it looks clean and not too much.
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
It did suit the storyline pretty well

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
I liked the overall vibes it was giving me and the amount of details. (In my opinion) However, I think it could've had a tad bit more of a mention of the characters. I do understand and love that the summary reeled me in. It's perfect how it is now actually.
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
Yes it did

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
It's on its way to including all elements. I say it's on its way because it doesn't have an ending yet but is still a great book.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes. It was the detail in the emotion and scenes that kept me going.
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
There were a bit including the use of the words 'and' and 'but' after periods. Also the use of an ellipsis which basically is the three dots following a sentence. I say that only because there were sentences with four to five dots instead of three

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
There were a bit of marks that were either misplaced or not where they're supposed to go.

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
It made perfect sense
Score: (7/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were introduced well. They were nicely weaves into the story without just almost magically appearing out of nowhere.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
Yes. There were no 'pointless' dialogue
Score: (5/5)

Total: (47/50)
The emotion. Emotions in this book was something out of this world. I teared and almost cried a few times as it did mention and talk about sensitive topics but the characters emotions and words made me tear. This book is sad, but still amazing. I've seen every cover the book had in the past and I have to say I enjoyed all of them. Great job!

My apologies for taking a bit more time but your last review should be out in a day or less❤️!

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