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Achromatic

ghostair (3/6)

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
I like the fact that the title alone gives off certain vibes. It most likely could stand by itself.

- Does it reel you in?
At first glance it caught my attention without even reading the book.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
For this title, I haven't seen any other book with it. It was used creatively in the story with Mia and her situation.
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It perfectly matches the storyline as it had the main character

- Is it attention grabbing?
Yes. Especially when it suits the title so well

- Did it seem creative and unique?
As always with your books, It has a balance of both. I like the way you portrayed the word "Achromatic" in the cover with the lack of color.
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Very well suited

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
Now I see why your summaries are so short. They provide enough information to reel readers in. Even if it's just one sentence.

- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
Yes. I really loved it although it's short
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
Yes it did flow very well.

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
I agree that it does have all elements. It shows during the beginning and perfectly makes it way to having all elements towards the end

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It has a balance of creativity and uniqueness. It had that plot twist in the end which I absolutely loved.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
It was very interesting and appealing so I finished it in one sitting. I like how there were cliffhangers. That's also what kept me reading
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
No not at all

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
So there were only a one or two mistakes which were only spaces after a sentence. Everything else is perfectly fine.

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
Nope. Every single part made sense as you read through.
Score: (9/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
As the story progresses their roles become more clear. Their personalities could be seen as well.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
There were no pointless dialogue.
Score: (5/5)

Total: (49/50)
This book made me cry 😂. I really felt heartbroken but I really enjoyed it. As I said your points came out to 49/50 only because of one or two sentences starting without a space after the period.

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