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pi3_here - (1/3)

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
I do think the title matches the storyline well

- Does it reel you in?
It slightly reeled me in as I became curious. It doesn't say too much about the story as a first impression

  - Did it seem creative and unique?
I've seen it used for other books as well which knocks off a point but don't be discouraged. It was creative to see how you put the title to use even if you unintentionally did.
  Score: (4/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
The cover is well made and clean. It's simple but attractive and relevant.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
I have to say it is poking a bit simplistic but at least its enough to catch my eye and compliment the title.
Score: (5/5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
It suits fairly well. It provided a bit of information to the plot without giving away too much

-Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
I agree it did him me but by curiosity. It didn't hook me as well as it should have.
Score: (4/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It did flow fairly well even with those flashbacks throughout the story which I like.

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
So far, yes. It isn't completed but i like the way the story is slowly rising on its feet. The first beginning chapters seem a bit rushed to be completely honest but it throughly explains everything in detail which is good.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes it was. Every chapter seems to get even more appealing and alluring as I went through it. I can see the thoughts put into it. I loved it so far
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
There were grammatical errors but very few. Sentence and paragraph structure was the main concern(Will explain under total points).

-Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Throughout the story there are simple misplacing of very few commas but nothing too major to take away from the story
Score: (8/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
The flashbacks were providing a good backstory to the characters so it was pretty spot on to say the least.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
I liked their dialogue. It wasn't too much nor too less and had no pointless conversations.
Score: (5/5)

Total: (46/50)
    You have a great concept going on. However, I didn't mention it in plot but while reading, my main question would be "What kind of business do they have?" It talks about underground fights and things but I have a bit of a hard time to put things together. I do love the book though, it's different from others which gives it that unique factor.

    Now for the sentence and paragraph structure. Your sentences make sense for the most part but for a few parts, the wording is a bit off. It may have been small typos but it isn't too major.
    The paragraphs are a bit too short but can be easily lengthened by putting a few sentences together. I suggest to do this because then it'll reduce the amount of run-on sentences.

I hope this helps! Your other two reviews will be published in the next coming days❤️

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