pi3_here - (2/3)
1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
I like the title. It sets a bit of the intended mood towards the story
- Did it seem creative and unique?
I haven't seen this title used before which is great. The mood setting tags into the uniqueness it should have.
Score: (5/5)
2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It did suit the storyline and title very well!
- Did it seem creative and unique?
As the title tags into the uniqueness, the cover compliments the title and setting of the book.
Score: (5/5)
3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Perfect length and detailed summary.
- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
It served almost as an official teaser of the book. Perfect details placed helped keep me hooked. I'd just suggest to shorten just a tad bit by condensing it into a bigger paragraph instead of single sentences.
Score: (5/5)
4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It flowed fairly well
- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
I'd say yes it does, it isn't finished but their was a constant rise in the plot so I would believe it'll contain all five elements.
- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
I was curious to continue reading but no difference.
Score: (20/20)
5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
Grammatical wise meaning spelling, no there weren't any mistakes with that. However with sentences, there are easy mistakes of missing words to keep the sentence smooth and flowed.
- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very few. Very few
Score: (7/10)
6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were introduced or weaved in very nicely
-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
All dialogues made sense and did not contain any pointless dialogue
Score: (5/5)
Total: (47/50)
I like the concept you have going on. I do. Everything is on point except for the grammatical errors which are easy fixes. I'm amazed because for my personal preferences, I don't usually read these kind of books but it managed to keep me hooked. Great Job!
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