Short-Lived

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1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It does suit the storyline nicely. I like it
- Does it reel you in?
Yes, It did reel me in. I like the connection and the way it suits pretty well to the book
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
The cover matched the storyline and did have potential as it included a main character.
- Did it seem creative and unique?
It didn't seem as unique as it should be meaning, it is a bit plain and not as eye catching.
Score: (4/5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Yes it did suit the story but seemed a bit short, not giving me enough information of the story.
- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
It was great to actually keep me hooked.
Score: (4/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It did flow fairly smoothly and well.
- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
It is obviously on its way to including all.
- Did it seem creative and unique?
It's different in a sense, but seems like a plot that I could imagine happening.
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
I didn't spot any major errors except for sentence structure. sentences did seem a bit off and confusing as words were simply missing from its rightful place.
- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very very few were misplaced but it isn't much of a big deal.
Score: (9/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
I didn't get to fully understand and get to know the other characters as well as the main character but for first impressions, it was great.
-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
They all made sense which is great.
Score: (4/5)

Total: (46/50)
Let me just say the feelings I felt while reading the story was intriguing. Especially in the very first chapter of the book did I really get hooked and continue through. I do feel that the cover could have been more detailed and made to fit the book better. He seems too happy to match the title"short-lived" but still looks good either way. Great work!
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