TOKYO

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yoongeen

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
I like the title. It sets a bit of the intended mood towards the story

- Did it seem creative and unique?
I haven't seen this title used before which is great. The mood setting tags into the uniqueness it should have.
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It did suit the storyline and title very well!

- Did it seem creative and unique?
As the title tags into the uniqueness, the cover compliments the title and setting of the book.
Score: (5/5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
It was a bit short to really hook me into continuing but it is a great straightforward description.

- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
Again, not not exactly but with the title and cover it compliments each other perfectly.
Score: (4/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It flowed fairly well

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
I'd say yes it does, it isn't finished but their was a constant rise in the plot so I would believe it'll contain all five elements.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
I was curious to continue reading. Especially with the very first chapter, the prologue. Now that was the perfect way to reel me in.
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
Not that I read so far.

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
Only very very few were placed wrong.
Score: (9/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were introduced or weaved in very nicely

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
All dialogues made sense and did not contain any pointless dialogue
Score: (5/5)

Total: (48/50)
I like the concept you have going on. I do. I'm amazed because for my personal preferences(and I've mentioned this with a previous review) I don't usually read these kind of books but it managed to really keep me hooked and I enjoyed it. Amazing Job!

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