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The Thingummy

Empress_Noorie

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It directly gives a hint towards the story and yes, good choice.

- Does it reel you in?
It absolutely did. It seemed very mysterious but also surely attention grabbing

- Did it seem creative and unique?
No doubt about it being creative and unique. It's such an unexpected title that it surprised me and instantly hooked me. I just love it
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It did way more than just suit the story, it foreshadows what those characters look like and who they are.

- Is it attention grabbing?
Of course it is. The characters and images used in the cover were very interesting that I could not stop looking at it.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It is very intriguing. The way those characters are made to match the story is incredible. Considering the fact that I did not know what the word meant at the time.
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
I like how the summary managed to say so much but not too much(if you know what I mean).

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
I really enjoyed just the summary. I may sound repetitive but that's how interesting it was to me. To say a circus
Score: (5/5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
It was paced very well. I love the way dates and times were given, it gave the book an extra pop of creativity. Which answers the question of creativity and uniqueness.

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
From the time where it all started(info provided in very first chapter) to the last updated chapter, it's still in that slope. The slope where the plot builds up to reach the peak or the problem.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes I finished all updated chapters in one sitting but only because it was interesting(it is explained more in the Grammar and Punctuation category).
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
There were spelling errors. Including a few words that didn't need to be where they were. There are run-on sentences.

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
There were a bit of marks that were either misplaced or not where they're supposed to go.

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
A few parts of the story hadn't made sense because of the grammatical errors.
Score: (5/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were introduced with very clear details as I read on. I appreciated the character overview in the first chapter.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
Some dialogue seemed to take away from the story. I understand it's just the beginning it there are only a few sentences that don't need to happen. However, it is all up to you on how you feel.
Score: (4/5)

Total: (43/50)
I absolutely love the cover. The concept and connection is incredible. The storyline is one I haven't seen at all which clearly shows that it is unique and well thought- out. Amazing work!

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