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Illuminating Heart

ghostair (1/6)

1. Title
- Did the title suit the storyline?
It perfectly weaves into the storyline.

- Does it reel you in?
At first glance it caught my attention with curiosity. It gave me a pure and true love vibe. Interesting.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It seemed well thought-out, unique and creative. Including the beautiful reference to the title in the prologue.
Score: (5/5)

2. Cover
- Did the cover suit the storyline?
It perfectly fit with the storyline as it had a main character

- Is it attention grabbing?
It immediately caught my attention without even reading the book.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It is unique with the amount of color and effects. It gives me a mystical feeling and the creativity can clearly be seen. I love it! Especially the strike circling Jungkook.
Score:(5 /5)

3. Summary
- Did the summary suit the storyline?
Very well suited

- Enough in length?(Did it provide enough info)
The true description is included in the prologue which is very alluring but as for the summary, it is very short.
For being so short, it still has potential.

- Was it just enough to keep you hooked?
For it being two sentences it did lure me into seeing what the story was about. I'm just worried that it won't catch the attention of other readers
Score: (4 /5)

4. Plot
- Did the plot flow well?
Yes it did flow very nicely. Well done

- Does it contain the 5 elements of a plot diagram?
The plot clearly showcased the event in which JK's life seemed pointless until he resolved everything after he met the girl, Yumi. In which, including all 5 elements from rising to falling.

- Did it seem creative and unique?
It has a balance of creativity and uniqueness. I really enjoyed having enough detail to picture everything from the scenery to the classrooms.

- Was it intriguing enough to continue reading?
Yes I finished in one sitting
Score: (20/20)

5. Grammar and Punctuation
- Were there many grammatical errors?
No not at all

- Were all punctuation marks placed in the correct places?
I am very glad to see no errors

- Did any part of the book seem to not make sense?
It all made sense which I really like. I was able to enjoy the book with no errors.
Score: (10/10)

6. Characters
- How well were they introduced?
They were first introduced as main characters in the prologue which I like. As the story progresses their roles become more clear.

-Did the dialogue between characters make sense?
Yes. The dialogue between the girl and JK was really sweet and adorable. I could feel the emotion and pain both of them endured.
Score: (5/5)

Total: (49/50)
This was a good book. I cried a few times at how adorable and heartbreaking it was to see what Jungkook had to go through. Again, it was just the fact that the summary every reader would see first that I worry it could take away from the book's true potential.

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