The Bubble Reviews 2.0 (ON HIATUS)

sky_is_limit review: Wings of Storm

Book : Wings Of Storm

Reviewer: sky_is_limit
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Author: draphy

Hey! Sorry, this is kind of late. You wanted me to focus on plot pace and character development which I did. As always, I do mention other things, so let's get started.

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Title/Cover/Blurb:

I love the title. With a search on Wattpad, it's the first and only to come up so it is unique and original. It also matches the story perfectly. Your cover is absolutely beautiful. No wonder you won the best cover in an award which I can't remember. I think the colors blend well because they're complementary and whoever made your cover did well in blending the colors. The title is noticeable and I love the font used. Now, your blurb. I think you've done a great job with your blurb. Immediately, the first sentence is hooking and the rest of it keeps your attention. From first glance, this seems like an amazing story (and it is).

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Grammar:

Your grammar is simply amazing. When reading, you can immediately tell that you were thorough in your proofreading and editing. I didn't see any mistakes save for an extra space in chapter 4.2. Other than that, I don't have much to say really. Keep up the good work, please! Good grammar is always a plus when reading.

While here, I need to say that your descriptions are simply amazing. No points did I see massive info-dumping, nor did anything lack vital information that would help really shape the story. Every second I read, I could picture the characters perfectly and even feel what they felt. You appealed to the five senses wonderfully and it was a pleasure to experience that.

Please keep using vivid details in your writing because that's a major plus, honestly.

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Plot Development (focus):

Okay, so you wanted me to focus on plot and plot pacing. Well, here's my take on the plot and what I felt while reading.

Before really getting into it, I want to mention one brief thing. In chapter 2.2, it seems Tahro went back in time. The chapter started on January 15th, then the day ended and became January 16th. Well, at the end of the chapter, it was back to January 15th, so that may be a typo until I read it improperly. Okay, now the good stuff.