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Hiii! I'm your reviewer, and this is my review of your book, The Imitator. This is a extended review, as I like to give persons fulls details of every aspect of the book itself.
Before I go into it, I have a little something to say. -I enjoyed your book very much, it's very unique and interesting. It was different from the types of books I usually read. I was very confused in most aspects, but I managed to grab on to what you were saying. It's lovely though, and I read all of it!-
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Book Cover
I love the book cover. It intercepts well with the plot itself, as well as the title. It caught my eye, as the cover is a foreshadow of the title itself. There is still room for more improvement, as I thought of ways you could make the book cover even better. This one though, is lovely, though the font choice could be something else.
Overall, Nice work!
Score: 8.5/10
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Title
As I said earlier, it intercepts well with the plot, and the book cover. The title intrigued me, and I immediately begun imagining what the book may entail, or what it may be about. Nice work on that!
Score: 9.5/10
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Chapters
The chapters were intriguing, as well as confusing, to say the least. It felt short and precise -that's the feeling I got from reading it-, and I was left muddled as to what took place from what. The flow was continuous in most chapters, but it felt clipped, in some places. There are some major loopholes here and there as well.
For the grammar, the sentences are wrong. You should not have a comma outside a declarative sentence, as it is a statement. Eg:
1) "Hmmm, are you sure you're not the heir of Wendy's franchise?",... should be, "Hmmm, are you sure you're not the heir of Wendy's franchise?"
