IMPORTANT:Rework

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I've been thinking about it and have decided to remake Beast Tamer part 1 to update the writing and grammar, fix the ending and some other parts of the story, and even make it longer.

But, one of the things that need to be fixed the most, it the harem, specifically how many girls are in the harem which was +13 people.

So, I'll be going through myself to choose who works narratively and who the community liked the most, and that's where you come in. I want you guys to pick 5-6 girls you want to stay in the harem, while the others either turn into normal characters. However, your options have changed up just a bit more with the inclusion of new characters and some missing characters. Also, Jackie default a part of the harem.

Your choices are:

Jess Hill

Mellisa White

Kathy Sharp

Amelia White

Jasmine Stone

Charlotte Perkins

Maya Hand

And the new options + never seen before options:

Emma Fang: Because she was so requested

Redd Hall: Don't worry, you won't be stealing her from Jace

Zahra

Quick Bio: Ex-military and close friend with the Fang family, Zahra is frequently seen with both Emma and Bishop when she checks in on the family

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Quick Bio: Ex-military and close friend with the Fang family, Zahra is frequently seen with both Emma and Bishop when she checks in on the family. Despite this and her relationship with the family, Zahra is quite distant, almost seeming uncomfortable around the family and people in general, only relaxing when around (Y/n) or when at the local gym.

Ali Khan

Quick Bio: Ali is a new student to IronWall Academy that has quickly become popular among the students and enjoys the attention given to her by both girls and boys alike

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Quick Bio: Ali is a new student to IronWall Academy that has quickly become popular among the students and enjoys the attention given to her by both girls and boys alike. However, she seems to have a strange almost obsession with (Y/n) as he doesn't chase after her as others do, often attempting to seduce and get closer to him.

Rachel Tulip

Quick Bio: As Nick puts it, Rachel is "the most laid back and horny cat milf around" who enjoys coffee enough to work at Locha Mocha, the local donut shop in town, just for the free coffee

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Quick Bio: As Nick puts it, Rachel is "the most laid back and horny cat milf around" who enjoys coffee enough to work at Locha Mocha, the local donut shop in town, just for the free coffee. But, with her caffeine addiction subsided and her becoming the new head of the shop, she has become a common sight for (Y/n) and co when they visit Locha Mocha after school, resulting in the cat to develop a slight crush on him.

So, leave your list of characters you want to stay apart of the harem in a comment. However, this is NOT a vote. This is a way for me to see which characters you, the readers, like, and would like to see stay in the remake.

(P.s: The main reason I'm doing this is because the Beast Tamer story has changed several times since the first part started and where we are in the second.)

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