C L O S E D - The Critique Fellowship -- [Partnership BOOK CLUB]

Assignment 16: September 9 -- September 16

A N N O U N C E M E N T S:

Not much here except pppuuummpppkins and apples!!! I'm gonna make so many pies lol I am very excited for fall this year :D I also ordered some bonsai trees and am finally gonna expand the tiny forest on my desk (haven't killed my current bonsai after having it for a year, and it's thriving, so let's see how these others go!)

I also wanted to thank everyone for their great work this week. It was a super easy week to check everyone's comments and everyone is doing such a great job!! I am so proud.

A S S I G N M E N T S:

Pairing One: IN POST PARTNERSHIP

Congrats you two!!! 😃🎉

-- Completed

Thank you for completing the partnership! You will be linked here just to keep track of your partner until their partnership is finished as well.

EeveeAndras-- WEEK 5 | Overall Thoughts

🖍️Please complete last week's as well (Just adding this for formality!)🖍️

This is a discussion to highlight your favorite aspects of the plot, and also discuss the overall, big picture ideas/critiques of the plot, now that the entire story is before you.

- Wrap up your thoughts.
- What is ONE thing you want to make sure you impart with the writer
- What is ONE thing you want to make sure that they keep in the story?
- What part did you hate?
- What part do you absolutely love?
- Did you like the way it ended?
- Was the progress of the story smooth, or choppy at times?
- How was the pacing?
- Did the overall story need to trim down in description? Maybe work on the dialogue?
- Or did you love the descriptions?