For those of you that have gotten this far, I have an important message.
I realize that I have a few plot holes. Many of them will be addressed throughout the story. Others I will go back and edit. This is basically my first draft.
Secondly, I know that some things happened too quickly. Like the thing with Ash and Ember. I WILL GO BACK AND FIX IT.
Okay, that's all. Thanks for reading! I love the support and I would love more comments and votes.
-Em
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Started With An Ember
FantasyEmber Anala, a high spirited, fiery, rebellious girl discovers what her element is and begins her training. Her brother Dune has a mission, to become in control over their world and he has good chances of succeeding unless Ember uses her powerful el...