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So uh, this is just me rewriting lyrics, not a proper chapter per say. But, of course, this is from the POV of Tommy

Trigger Warnings: Suicide, mention of 'heartbreak' + bullying + abuse.

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ೃ⁀➷Just as I was about to take my shoes
Off of the rooftop there I see
A girl with braided hair there before me
Despite myself I go and scream;

"Hey,
Don't do it, please"

Whoa, wait a minute what did I just say?
I couldn't care less either way
To be honest I was somewhat pissed;
This was an opportunity missed

The girl with braided hair told me her woes
"You've probably heard it all before;
I really thought that they may be the ones
But then he told me they were done...!"

"For God's sakes please! Are you serious?! I just can't believe-"
That for some stupid reason you got here before me!
"-Are you upset 'cause you can't have what you wanted?!
You're lucky that you've never got taken away from everything!"

"I'm feeling better thank you for listening!"
The girl with braided hair then disappeared.

Alright, today's the day! Or so, I thought, just as I took both of my shoes off. There was but a boy, short as can be, despite myself, I go and scream-

The petite boy told me his woes; 'you've probably heard it all before'.

"Everyone ignores me, everyone steals! I don't fit in with anyone here!"

"For god's sake, please! Are you serious?! I just can't believe, that-" For some stupid reason, you got here before me!  "-'Cause, even so, you're still loved by everyone at home! There's always dinner waiting on the table, y'know...?"

"I'm hungry," said the boy as he shed a tear. The boy short as can be then disappeared.

And, like that, there was someone everyday. I'd listen to their tales; I made them turn away.
And yet there was no one who would do this for me; no way I could let out all this pain...

For the very first time, there I see, someone with the same pains as me. Having done this time and time again-- He wore a yellow cardigan...

"I just wanna stop the scars that grow-
Every time that I go 'home'...
That's why I came up here instead...!"

That's what the ghost in the cardigan said.

Whoa wait a minute what did I just say?
I couldn't care less either way.
But in the moment I just screamed,
Something that I did not believe;

"Hey,
Don't do it, please..."

Shit- What to do!? I can't stop this boy, oh this is new!
For once I think I've bitten off more than I can chew!
But even so,
"Please just go away so I can't see!
Your pitiful expression is just too much for me..!"

"I guess today is just not my day..."
He looked away from me and then he disappeared...?

There's no one here today, I guess it's time
It's just me, myself and I
There's no one who can interfere
No one to get in my way here

Taking off my yellow cardigan.
Watching my bandages all come undone.
This selfish boy tall as can be,
Is gonna jump now and be free--

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"TOMMY-!"

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Lmao, I love cliffhangers- I might write a part two of this, but with actual story to it and not just a song rewrite -Noi

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