Honey Magazine/My Sweet Proposal: Todo Masaya

Preface

Hello!

I want to continue to share the continuation of My Sweet Proposal: Todo Masaya that was shared first by Otakugirl495. I really love the story. Otakugirl495 shared it until Chapter 4, so I'll pick it up from Chapter 5. There is overall 11 chapters and a season 2 with 6 chapters.

I had read the original story by OKKO four times with three different endings (wedding end, good end, and normal end). The first one was on YouTube haha!

So, this is my fifth time reading it. I want to write this down so I can read it again later.

However, after OKKO decided to compile all of their games into one app "Honey Magazine", I noticed that they had cut down a lot of scenes but at the same time, they added a lot of response for MC. This gives more depth to MC's character development and their relationship.

And I also noticed that they change a few lines... I don't know if the lines were changed because it was controversial or just an update of the translation since the original game was in Japanese if I remember correctly.

Well, I wish they didn't cut down those scenes from the original, but I love the updated version too! 😊

I will also share the extra chapters as well. The extra chapters in between such as Chapter 1.5 and Chapter 6.5 are from original version, but you need to pay to read them. If I remember correctly, the extra chapters in the original game was the same scene for MC but instead of MC's point of view, it was Masaya Todo's point of view.

Everything that was from Masaya Todo's point of view is from the original game. I  don't remember about the rest. Which change for the better or not...

I don't remember if Chapter 2.5 is from the original or not, but I am sure that Chapter 3.5 and Chapter 3.6 are from the updated version. Or my memory was just that bad? Whatever the case, if you read it, you'll know why I love the updated version as well >///<. 

The second season was also not added into Honey Magazine. I have a thought about this, but I'll put the notes on that chapter later, or else, the content would be spoiled from the beginning haha.

Oh, I also changed a few things. My character's name is Kana Miura, and, in the game, Masaya calls me "Kana", but Kana calls him "Mr. Todo" or "Todo". I changed the script to Kana and Masaya. I want both of them to call each other by their first name because I think it is more natural that way.

I also changed Ryoichi Sakura to Ryo because it's easier for me to type his name if it's shorter. I wish I could call Kisaragi with Kisa or Ki or anything LOL. Typing their name made my hand cramps haha... I hope you don't mind this small change.

I also put my reaction to the game. It was written in bracket as (My note) because sometimes, I have a different reaction than my character in the game. I hope you don't mind this one too, hehehe.

It would be better to read the story while playing these background music. It really catches the mood:

1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nh-eNIHtsrg

2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VxhF7mP2QVo

That's all from me, enjoy!