I promise to make longer chapters and more detailed descriptions. I realized that yes my writing is good if y'all love it so I decided to try one chapter going as detailed and creative as possible. Please comment honest opinions and let me know what you think. I am a writer I look for critis I want to get better at writing so tell me what y'all don't like about how I write or what you do. I've also decided if this chapter doesn't get 15 likes in 20 days. I will delete the book. Bold and risky yes but every hero has their flaw. Every writer has a cramp, every dancers has that one move, everyone has that one thing that makes them different and weird.
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Merle's hidden Daughter
RandomJasmine Dixon, was Merle's only child. He didn't really want her but her mother died and he didn't know anyone from her side. Merle only showed her tough love to make her strong, he figured if he's stuck with a kid she might as well be strong.
