Shauna's pov
I can tell why their surprised but Tris finds it to be the super natural. All of a sudden I see a girl with dark hair that hardly reaches her shoulders. She looks like... oh my God, Lynn.
"So I hear that my sister is still with that idiot and he even got her knocked up. Well, Shauna, I thought you were smarter than that. Who would ever think that you would sleep with such a dumb ass?" She says with an evil grin.
When she starts walking towards me, Tris faints. Or at least looks like she faints. I see blood on Marlene's shirt when she picks up Tris.
"Oh my gosh! She bleeding a lot! She needs a doctor, STAT!!!!!!!!!!!" (I really like caps, it makes stuff more dramatic) She yells.
Then people start going down and soon, I do too. But before I go into the darkness I notice that only the girls are going down.
Zeke's pov
I hear screams and cries and falling bodies. Don't ask how I know that last sound, really long story. I see Shauna's body go limp on the floor a few yards away and the rest of the girl's bodies. But Tris and Mar have blood on them. We all sprint to our girls and carry them out of the mall. We have to take them to the hospital. We split into two cars. Pedrads in one car and everyone else in this one. Four people per car so I call 911 and tell them to have 4 rooms in the ER ready. When Uriah finally gets the car to turn on I see Lynn walk out a side entrance with a smug smile. She sees me too and sticks up her middle finger at me with an oh-so-sweet smile.
I can't imagine a sister doing something so terrible to her own family and former friends. She's undeniably a nightmare dressed as a day dream.
Unitato's note: There is no good escuse for the fact that I haven't in 2 months. I'm sorry. Damn I just get caught up in reading and writing other stuff. btw I learned that I enjoy reading thg fanfictions more than Divergent ones. So now you know what a lot of the books I've been reading are about. Mainly district though. Um, so how are you guys? probably mad at me right now but you'll get over the angryness towards me because I'm going to not read anything on wattpad till Saturday. My mom took my ipod and that's where I read and write on wattpad. So only updates on stories. If you like the hunger games go read my fanfics bye guys
YOU ARE READING
Our After
Hayran KurguThis is the sequel to my story, "Divergent High". For All the people that chose to read till the end, this is what you are looking forward to! This is after they graduate high school and college. Except Uriah he is still a famous pancycake. Especial...
