Turns out Zach is a well known criminal and we broke up

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Brooklyn's pov

So me and Zach broke up and yeah it was going so well and we had a good relationship and everything was working out so well until i found out something that changed our relationship forever!

Ok so my day started kinda like my days start, I get up and I drink some coffee so that I'm awake and then I would whatever seemed like a thing to do for today. I was home alone and so it was kinda different, they needed my brother's help so they had him come in to the breau  so yeah I was home alone. I didn't hate it but I was so bored, I wanted to hang out with Zach but he said he was busy doing something which was weird because he's never busy and always has time for me so that was a little sus but whatever I'm not going to think anything of it.

So great! I'm basically lonely today, Neal isn't home and is helping The FBI cause they needed his help, like he doesn't even work for them anymore! Zach said he was busy and so what am I going to do, I am so bored!

Neal's Pov

I got to take a break so I went and sat on the steps and called Brooke but she doesn't answer. 

Brooklyn's Pov

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Brooklyn's Pov

I got so bored so I literally just took a shower. I heard my phone ring but I couldn't get it since I was in the shower so I let it ring and go straight to voicemail.

Later when I got out, I went over to my phone and looked to see who called me, it was Neal! Dang it, he probably is worried about me!

I called him back so quickly and I said "Sorry I was in the shower"

He then asked me what I was doing and I said "I have no idea, I'm so bored because your working and Zach said he was busy so what I'm trying to say is when are you coming home, I am kinda losing my mind Neal"

He told me how I could come visit him and maybe help him and I said "Ok why not! I would love to! Ha, it's like The Caffrey siblings are working on a case together, oh yes maybe I'll help catch my first criminal"

So I went to see him and he didn't know the name of the person they were trying to catch but whatever and I mean at least I get to try and catch my first criminal.

It took hours and hours, I never knew how boring it is to help The FBI catch criminals until I did it. I mean how did he do this for a long time, I mean I just want to go home and sleep, which I could but that would probably make me even more bored. I could have spent the day with my amazing boyfriend but he's busy for the first time we've been dating and now I'm trying to help my brother and The FBI catch someone, ugh HELP!

After about 2 or 3 hours they finally catch the person and when I found out who it was, I almost peed my pants. It was Zach! So turns out Zach is a well known criminal and he goes by his full name which is Zach Miller and he's done some bad stuff. He also dates girls and then gets rid of them after awhile so that means that soon he was gonna kill me. I literally yelled in his face "We are done! I'm breaking up with you, so what, you were gonna kill me?"

He said "No no I love you Brooke, I would never hurt you"

I said "So what that meant that our first time wasn't real, I HATE YOU AND I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!"

After they took Zach away I ran home crying. I was so upset that my boyfriend used me and then was going to kill me after he was done with me. How could I have been so stupid to think that he actually loved me.

I got home and I ran into my room and I couldn't stop crying.

I got home and I ran into my room and I couldn't stop crying

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Neal's Pov

I was gonna run after her but I didn't, I wanted to give her some space. She didn't deserve to go through this, she deserves better then to get her heartbroken. I was sitting on the steps of a building messing with my fedora and thinking about her. I wanted to know how I could make her feel better.

 I wanted to know how I could make her feel better

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Brooklyn's pov

I justed wanted Neal to hold me and tell me everything's gonna be ok. I took out my phone and called him and I didn't care that I was still crying, I needed my big brother. I said "Neal? I need you to come home, I want you to hold me and tell me everything's gonna be ok"

He rushed home and when he got inside, I ran right into his arms. He stroked my hair and then he said "Do you want to talk about it?"

I nodded my head and so we sat down and he started telling me to tell him everything.

I said *crying* "I just feel so stupid that I loved a guy who didn't even love me at all, a guy who used me and was gonna kill me once he was done with me, I am never gonna love any boy ever again because I am good with being single"

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I said *crying* "I just feel so stupid that I loved a guy who didn't even love me at all, a guy who used me and was gonna kill me once he was done with me, I am never gonna love any boy ever again because I am good with being single"

We talked for awhile and then we laid down and I laid my head on my brother's chest and fell asleep.

I'm still upset about everything that happened but I guess what I learned is never date criminals, their more likely to break your hearts! I'll never make that mistake again, never!

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I'm still upset about everything that happened but I guess what I learned is never date criminals, their more likely to break your hearts! I'll never make that mistake again, never!

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