Sins of the Elite (18+)

Summary and the hot Poll

Summary of last three chapters -

Hello lovely readers, this post is for those people who didn't read the last 3 parts because they were explicit.

Just giving the basic summary of what the three chapters were about.

Arjun Trivedi, the best friend of Advait Sharma, is in a relationship with Mehwish Khan, one of the three bitches of Elite group.

They have kept their relationship in private. But they are madly in love with each other. Mad is an understatement when it is to describe what Arjun is. He's wild, evil, ferocious and not really a good friend.

He loves Mehwish but the relationship isn't easy. As she's Muslim and he's Hindu, their marriage would still create conflict and her parents won't agree. It's not explained it details but hinted that Mehwish's father might be a bit radical and wouldn't accept Arjun as his son in law. It's also hinted that her father might even try to kill him.

Considering all this, Arjun has only one option - to attain as much power as possible where her father or anyone can't even touch them. How is he planning to do that? By becoming heir of Karan Veer Sharma, an already established powerful politician who happens to be Advait's uncle.

Arjun is already in contact with Karan Veer Sharma but to become the heir and not just a political worker, he's planning to get Advait killed. So, Karan Veer Sharma sees only Arjun as his heir.

So, this is how the story has progressed in the last three chapters - 1) The villain (Arjun) is introduced. 2) His relationship and mad love for Mehwish is explored. 3) His evil of killing Advait is introduced.

Mehwish knows about his plan too. She doesn't support it but she knows it and may not be fully against it either. In the end, she's just loyal to Arjun and cares less for Advait.

Other than that, it's introduced that Arjun is evil. He's not a good person. He loves Mehwish deeply but there's lust too. He does love her but he's toxic in a way that he wants to conquer her, even sexually. That's how he is.

So, that's it.

Feedback -

As the story is moving forward to it's climax, I would really love it if my special readers gives some feedback/review/criticism.

I have few questions too.

1) Do you want me to end the story as intended (last 7-8 chapters) or want a longer version of it where Avantika's marriage is explored (maybe 20-30 chapters more)?

2) The ones who did read Arjun and Mehwish's steamy parts, what do you think of the couple?

3) Should I change my writing style or anything?

4) Can you give suggestions on how I can get more views, support etc? I see other writers writing way less but getting way more views. Am I doing something wrong?

5) Why am I not gaining any followers? While I can see many writers having lots and lots of followers. Am I doing something wrong?

So, that's it, but I would also like to interact with you. Please comment and all.

Thank you.

It's really a nice experience writing this story and I am really hoping that you guys are enjoying it. I have two other stories but not sure whether I should continue them or not.

By the way, i might write another story after this one, any popular theme you want me to write on?

Other than this, lots of fairy dusts to all of you. Love you, and may all of you have a nice day, month, year.

Poll

Coming to the poll, so both protagonist (Advait) and villain (Arjun) are introduced.

Tell me in comments whom do you find hotter? 🙈🙈🙈