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Niharika Verma is a stunning semi-classical dancer who wants nothing more than to travel the world, but the shackles of her dreadful past keep her grounded. On the other end, Asia's well-known businessman and CEO of Ra...
Thank you so much for your feedback. I've received a few messages about the way Shaurya and Disha's relationship evolved, especially the lack of groveling on Shaurya's part and their intimacy. I understand why some of you might feel this way, and I want to address those concerns while also explaining the creative decisions behind this.
This novel has grown to over 90 chapters, and in my experience, most readers prefer stories that wrap up around 60-70 chapters. Pacing is crucial to maintaining engagement, and my goal was to keep the story tight and impactful. This is why I had to make some tough decisions, like cutting Shaurya's groveling scene and the prologue divorce scene. It wasn't because those moments weren't important, but because I didn't want the story to drag or feel unnecessarily prolonged.
As for their intimacy, please understand that it was a decision based on mutual understanding between Shaurya and Disha. They believed that having a second child would strengthen their relationship, and in that moment, their love and hopes for the future brought them together. Relationships are complex, and sometimes love expresses itself in ways that aren't always traditional or expected.
Some of you also mentioned feeling uncomfortable after their intimate moment, and I respect that. But with only two chapters left, I want to remind you that the main storyline has already concluded. In closing, I just want to say how deeply grateful I am for all of you. You've stood by this story, flaws and all, and it's your support that keeps me going. I know I've made mistakes along the way, and there were times when I couldn't fully capture the emotions I intended, but I'm learning every day to write better, to pour more heart into each scene.
Thank you for being here with me, and I hope you'll continue to support me as we finish this story. Let's aim for 4K votes, 500+ comments, We're almost at the end, and I promise you, your love and dedication means the world to me.
Once again, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Author's POV :-
"What were you attempting to do there? Do you have any shame? Tell me. Why are you quiet? Now your mouth is closed, but you were performing a strip show for those girls outside." Without giving Maanveer a chance, Niharika was imitating.
Niharika was glaring at him as he sat on the living room couch, patting his damp hair with a towel.
Foolishly staring into her face, he was drawn even closer to her by the way she spoke without even trying to listen to him.
She was not always like this; perhaps pregnancy is causing her behavior to change. She is starting to lose her temper now.
"Why do you remain silent? Am I just a silly person talking to myself?" Observing him absorbed in his thoughts, she abruptly snapped back.
