Thank you so much for your feedback. I've received a few messages about the way Shaurya and Disha's relationship evolved, especially the lack of groveling on Shaurya's part and their intimacy. I understand why some of you might feel this way, and I want to address those concerns while also explaining the creative decisions behind this.
This novel has grown to over 90 chapters, and in my experience, most readers prefer stories that wrap up around 60-70 chapters. Pacing is crucial to maintaining engagement, and my goal was to keep the story tight and impactful. This is why I had to make some tough decisions, like cutting Shaurya's groveling scene and the prologue divorce scene. It wasn't because those moments weren't important, but because I didn't want the story to drag or feel unnecessarily prolonged.
As for their intimacy, please understand that it was a decision based on mutual understanding between Shaurya and Disha. They believed that having a second child would strengthen their relationship, and in that moment, their love and hopes for the future brought them together. Relationships are complex, and sometimes love expresses itself in ways that aren't always traditional or expected.
Some of you also mentioned feeling uncomfortable after their intimate moment, and I respect that. But with only two chapters left, I want to remind you that the main storyline has already concluded. I'm working towards releasing LOVE TILL ETERNITY (LTE) in paperback soon, and in this version, you'll get a separate, extended story of Maanveer and Niharika with additional scenes that I hope will deepen your connection to their journey.
Regarding Shaurya and Disha, I promise they will have their own standalone book in the future. I plan to delve into their perspectives, the mistakes they made, and the journey that leads to their redemption. This will allow me to give their story the attention and depth it deserves, but it won't happen immediately. I have my upcoming 5th-semester exams and university entrance tests to prepare for, and I may need to pause writing until after November.
For the paperback version of LTE, I hope to release it by January, but if not, it will definitely come out after March. I want to keep the pricing affordable so that everyone who's supported this journey can own a copy.
In closing, I just want to say how deeply grateful I am for all of you. You've stood by this story, flaws and all, and it's your support that keeps me going. I know I've made mistakes along the way, and there were times when I couldn't fully capture the emotions I intended, but I'm learning every day to write better, to pour more heart into each scene.
Thank you for being here with me, and I hope you'll continue to support me as we finish this story. Let's aim for 4K votes, 500+ comments, and 7.5K followers before the next update. We're almost at the end, and I promise you, your love and dedication means the world to me.
Once again, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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