Chapter 17 "Taming the monster"

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SURPRISE!!!!! GUESS WHO UPDATED? THIS GAL! Sorry for the caps but I finally got a computer to work for me! *Sings hallelujah* Anyway, this was the most demanding story to be updated so, enjoy meh friends! This week end I plan on working on more stories since i'm busy with school this week. So...HAPPY MONDAY! Btw, I didn't read through it because I was too excited to get this posted so anyway, ignore the horrible grammar and spelling issues. I'm so proud of myself right now! anyway, comment down below and tell me what yall think of this chapter, I worked my butt off and took time off of doing Honors Geometry homework for this  chapter, Also, quick question, I'm also in the process of getting a Novel published FOR REAL BY A COMPANY that I've been working on for a year but anyway, I am working on the sequel for it because its going to be a seven part book series and anyway was wondering if you all would like to get a character in the book. I'll post a story for any entries or any suggestions on my profile for it and give out more detail so please pray for me that I can get this thing published! If I do, i'll publish half of the first chapter on Wattpad to give a small example of it like a teaser. Also if I do get the book series published, should I create a wattpad account just for that book series and such? Idk, sorry for making you read this and watching me blabber about so anyway, chapter 17 of D.H.P.

Me and CottonFoot lead the Patrol to Flowerclan. I had spoken to Pinestar for some......'special' arrangements. I heard some mumbles from Icepaw. I snapped at her a few times. Mousepaw looked a bit worried, i think she knew what i was up to.

 We soon arrived to the place. I over heard Cottonfoot and the others saying to take a different road. I hissed at them to go the way me and Pinestar had prepared for.

"Lets take the back way" I spoke in a low voice "That way we can take them by surprise."

Applestar looked at me for a few moments and nodded "Good idea. Cottonfoot, we're taking the back way."

Cottonfoot turned around and nodded. I purred softly to myself for what I have done. We kept walking for a little bit more till we hit a flower patch. The scent bugged my nose dearly as there was too much scent around here. How did flowerclan cats stand this scent? all seemed to go well until the soft mew of Icepaw fueled my anger.

"The flowers" she said "They'll hide our scent."

"Of course they will mouse-brain" I mumbled under my breath I quickly walked past her, pushing her aside "I don't care" I hissed "Plus everyone knows that!"

I quickly made my way past the little pest. I festered on my thoughts about her. She killed my sister, the only one I liked, that liked me. If it weren't for she, My sister would be here, with probably expecting blackwings kits by now. I murmured and mumbled under my breath when I was caught by surprise by a black pelt coming up at me by my side. I looked at bit stunned as he stared into Blackwings eyes.

"Its alright, it just me" he said seeing I has high on edge.

I let out a annoyed purr as I glanced behind me to see Icepaw and Mousepaw talking. Mousepaw didn't know the dangers of her sister, none at all!

"You seem....annoyed" he said "is it icepaw?"

I fixed my gaze at the black tom "why do you care?"

"I just do" he spoke "plus....we should get down now, we're just about close to their camp."

"Oh...right" I glanced back to the rest of the group.

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