Dawn of Vengeance

NOT A CHAPTER!!!

Okay, so I've gotten messages for a few of you guys asking about Jake. Mainly they all include something about him not being strong enough to compete with say a Gargoyle or Stark. I'd like to continue listening to you guys so I'm opening up the door for suggestions, because not all of you want him to change. But here are a few of the suggestions that I've gotten, alog with my thoughts on them. And do keep in mind that even if i don't agree with the suggestions listed, if you give it your vote and a decent reason why you want it to happen I just may be swayed to do it.

Some of you think Jake should become a vampire so that he can keep up with some of the faster beings. Personally I don't want Jake to be a vampire, because even though it compliments his style of being quick when he's fighting it WILL limit what he can do in the book. Especially during the day since he still has no clue how Stark is able to walk in the sun.

The other suggestion is that Jake become a werewolf, and I've even been given the scenerio of Lance turning him because Jake gets hurt. I don't want Jake to be a werewolf either because something that helps him is how quick he is. Not saying werewolves are slow, but in this particular story theyre quite clumsy because of their size.

Some of you even brought up the possibility of Jake becoming a witch. This i wouldn't have THAT much of a problem with, its just that witches in my story are very complex. I don't even know everything about them, but something I did mention was that one must be BORN a witch you canmt become one. So that one is kind of out the window.

Another was that Jake be some sort hybrid of werewolf and vampire, a wolpire I guess. And have gotten the scenerio of both Lance and Issac (or some other vampire) bitting him at the same time thus making a hybrid. Now call me old fashioned but this one has no chance, strictly because I think hybrids are overdone and kind of overrated. If you feel differently you can tell me but I'm just saying the odds of this one happening are pretty much zero.

Another suggestion was that Jake be bitten by a vamp or a wolf, but for whatever reason doesn't fully become one. This one I suppose could work, though I'm not a fan of half breeds they do have their own classifacations. half-vamp being called a dhampir, and half-wolf being lycan. Yes they're called lycans though idk why its all to technical for me to type or this would be as long as a chapter. So as far as Jake being a halfbreed, I don't know I'm sort of up in the air about it. Because as the readers of the first version of this story know, hafbreeds do exist for another type of Being. So it's a possibility but honestly I think itmd end up being weird because one would think Being blood would be dominant, but I digress.

Quite a few of you have said that you'd like for Jake to stay the way he is. Personally I think he's fine the way he is but you all know I'm a fan pleaser so I'll most likely do what you guys vote on. Except maybe the hybrid, although even I have to admit it'd be interesting to do I'm just not a fan of were-vamps. Plus it'd be nice to have a strictly human hero instead of having the usual "rare breed that only come around every 1000 years" type of thing you know?

Ultimately the decision IS mine, but I REALLY want to hear from you guys. So vote for what you'd like Jake to be and I'm begging you to at least give me a sentence or two telling me why I should choose that one. If i see something like "he should be a vampire" its not going to count, I'd like a reason behind it. Like why should he be a vampire give me a good enough argumentand I'll probably do it.

As this is not a chapter it'll be deleted by the end of September, so you guys will have plenty of time to cast your votes. And please, no fighting, if I see that I'll just take the comments down, be nice. So without further adue cast your votes, because it begins NOW!!!

-Love Jay :)