HELP PLEASE!
Okay wait, putting all caps make it sound so urgent and important or something when it completely isn't. For some reason I just want your help and your opinion about this girl's writing bootaefly and she's my sister, her name is Louise hahaha.
I JUST FOUND OUT HOW GOOD SHE WAS AT WRITING AFTER I READ HER RECOUNT LOL.
She's twelve and she has a Wattpad account for reading and I want her to sart writing soon because she's sooooo good like she's a lot better compared to me, to be really honest.
I want you to read this short draft she made and please tell me your honest opinions because we can't let such good talent go to waste. Seriously.
If you liked it (and you want to) you can message her and tell her to start writing soon because she's amazing. But don't force her LOL. Here's the draft.
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I'm not someone who's quick to dislike or hate anything.
But I definitely wasn't a fan of small claustrophobic stores relying on dim flickering lightbulbs, a floor which I assume hasn't been swept or cleaned for years, clothes with undeniably disgusting quality, and mannequins bent and twisted by children or careless workers not giving a single damn about their jobs.
But of course, what do I know about workers nowadays? I peeked inside, a bit surprised to see no person present. The place seemed abandoned. Miserable and left on its own by its workers to rot in this quiet side of the town. I almost felt sorry for it.
Yet despite being utterly disgusted at the sight of the store, I found myself not only walking in but also getting attracted to such a disgraceful shop's item. It wasn't some type of jewelry that somehow made its place in this store nor a rare-looking artifact that has been sealed here to keep people from finding it.
Instead it was a hat. A beanie if I have to be more descriptive. It had a design of a panda's face on it and its black ears at each side of the hat. Unlike the other items residing here, it seemed the cleanest out of them.
I liked its cuteness. It was nearly too irresistable to not even take. So without a second thought, I took the hat off its hook and claimed it mine for now.
My stomach started making these weird noises. I figured out that the longer I took, the longer I have to starve myself. I decided to just wait a bit more for the noises to stop. For sure I didn't prepare to die at a horrid setting. But maybe I'm just overreacting a bit too much.
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Please send her love LOL she should really start writing.
I'M NOT FORCING YOU FAM LISTEN TO ME PLS
YOU ARE READING
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