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Masked by MNJGreenhill

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Amazing! I don't like it for the reason the writer wrote it, but because it is a well thought out story.

Small rant below
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The writer was tired of how weak females were being portrayed. I get what the writer was talking about,but I don't agree fully. I've read stories where the female lead doesn't put up with being treated unfairly and stands up for herself. I do admit there are stories where I'm yelling,"Leave his ass!" I usually just stop reading them because if people stop reading and voting on those stories people will stop writing them.

Plus if you want to tell the writer that the characters need a little backbone just comment or message. But,there is the fact that it is there character and it could be part of the story/growth. Like I said if you don't like a story don't read it. Give it to chapter ten and if it doesn't get better drop it.Sometimes I don't even make it passed chapter five with some stories.

I don't understand how they get so many reads and votes when they don't have substance,some originality,at least been looked over before posting,and have a cover/title that isn't just click bait. I can understand a few grammar mistakes,but your story shouldn't be making my eyes roll every few paragraphs. I shouldn't be like,"really bitch really?" I should be able to enjoy a story and not think the write took a few basic story/plot lines and sprinkled in a few clichés and a drop of originality.

Okay, small rant over continue with the review. Sorry about that, but seriously do any of you agree with me? I know the stories I've attempted to write published and unpublished aren't spectacular, but at least I tried to stay away from most cliches. I know you can never get away from cliches because everybody loves them. Don't you agree that it seems like a lot of the stories now are copies of each other?
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Rant over

There are details in the story to where you can really imagine that's how it would be if werewolves were real.

A new drug that the werewolves can actually get hooked on has popped up. So now it is up to the Alpha Commander , the Alpha Alliance, and Parker to find out what's been happening. With the new drug open to the public the werewolves risk the humans finding out and countless lives being lost. Parker is familiar with the werewolf community (she is human) and is ordered to help them with her computer skills. While she deals with the Alpha Commander who hates her and doesn't think she's of much use.

Worth it!

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