Tris and Four's daughter

Visiting day

*3 weeks after fighting*

I wake up to Rosie pulling the duvet off me and shouting in my face. "GET UP CRYSTAL!!" She shouts and grins as I slowly open my eyes. "It's visiting daaayy!" She says in a sing song voice.

I slowly sit up and brush my long hair out of my face. I look around, I'm clearly the last to awaken. Kaden looks up and smiles. "You're awake!" He says and stands up, walking towards me. I throw my legs out of bed and grab my clothing which consists of black dauntless jeans, black shirt and jacket, and combat boots.

I strip and start changing my clothes, and I hear Kaden wold whistle. I shoot around, and raise my eyebrows whilst covering my topless torso with a shirt. He smiles and I roll my eyes, turn around and continue getting changed.

I pull my hair into a ponytail, which is in desperate need of a cut. It hangs past my waist and the ends are practically dead. Oops. I apply some ultra black mascara to make my eyelashes pop. I smile at the girl in the mirror. She's stronger than the old Crystal Eaton.

After breakfast, we go to training for our proper initiation. "Morning, initiates. You're final fight is just a few weeks away. We have been training you hard, but remember, people ranked below 8th will be kicked out. So work hard." Jona says and we resume fighting.

I've learned so much. I'm stronger mentally and physically, and I've had so many great experiences. I love it here in Dauntless!! I can't wait to see my mom and dad later. When training finishes early because of visiting day, me, Kaden and Rosie decide we don't want to go to go to the gym. We just want to relax before meeting our parents again!

We stroll into the dorm and see Tilly practically eating Tyler's face. Ugh. "Get a room." I say and roll my eyes.
She pulls away and glares at me. "Just because YOU will never make out with someone, doesn't mean you have to insult me." She says. I Huff and glare at her, but before I know it Kaden has walked over and starts kissing me.

It feels great... Our first proper kiss. I feel sparks, we are connected. I love him so much. It lasts for at least a minute. I eventually pull away and see Tilly with an evil look on her face. She sniffs and storms out. Tyler shrugs his shoulders and followed Tilly.

*a few hours later*
I walk hand in hand with Kaden into the pit to see our parents. I wander around through the stream of colours from different factions looking for my parents but I can't see them. I feel a pang of sadness in my heart. Maybe they didn't want to visit me.

But then I hear a loud voice, shouting "Crystal!" Dad?!?! I look up and see my dad walking out with my mum smiling, onto the ledge. I hear gasps around me. "Oh my gosh it's Four!!" "Wow! Them muscles!"

I run up the stairs and into my dads arms. Him and mum hug me and I hear more people murmuring. "Wow I never knew he was her dad." "Well we don't exactly know his last name so we couldn't have been able to tell!"

I smile. Happy to see my parents. "How are you?" I ask them
"We're fine. More importantly, how are you?" Mom says.
"I'm good. I have a boyfriend!" I say
"He better treat you good!" My dad jokes.
"He does." I say

And right on cue, Kaden walks up behind me and wraps his arms around me. "Hey Kaden, these are my parents." I say
"Nice to meet you!" Mom says and smiles
"You too!" Kaden says
"Good to meet you, Kaden." My dad says and nods
"And you" Kaden says and smiles.