Love At First Sight

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Uh, no.

This in most cases ruins the story. If you want a good story, you need to appeal and connect with the readers. Yeah, say your characters attracted to their mate (werewolf), but don't do love at first sight because then the readers won't get to know the characters.

You want to introduce and make the readers love or hate the characters before making any serious relationships.  Most of the people I have asked agreed with me in saying they like a juicy build up to the love connecting. Obviously, if your writing a romance story, then they will eventually connect. But describe the characters first. make the Readers love the characters BEFORE the characters love each other. Most people like a memorable,' I love you,' in chapter 20 instead of one you've put in in chapter 1.

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