Start With Action Of Some Sort

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Dont be boring.. be exciting and readers will want more. Instead of saying,

"last winter i found out i wasn't actually afraid of heights whilst skydiving"

start with the action and say,

" Adrenaline pumped through my veins as my feet swung up and down on the edge of the air plane's door. And suddenly, i felt a yearning to jump off.. With one hand fiercely gripping the parachute string, i squeezed my eyes shut and forced myself off the ledge. A hysterical laugh escaped from my lips as I floated weightlessly, every second falling through candyfloss clouds."

You've got to admit, even though my writing isn't top notch, that's more exciting.

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