For those fans that are still reading this story I am going to be starting over with it because I don't like the flow or speed of it. I personally feel like Sophia - Bella's Twin - didn't have enough human life experiences in the book.
I want more for the human part of her life. For instance, I want her to have a few parties, get into trouble with Charlie, hang out with friends, go to a dance, spend more time building the bonds with Benedict and Alice and maybe even sleep with a werewolf or two lol - still unceartain if that wolf will be Jacobs twin brother or Paul.
For the most part her personality will stay the same, but I think I'll make her little nicer, just with a smart mouth lol or at the minimum give her a filter.
When I post the revision I will update you with the link :)
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Twilight Fire and Ice
FanficSophia, Bella's fraternal twin, and Bella move to Forks to live with their father. Upon their arrival and their start to their new school they discover many things that strike their curiosity, one of them being the mysterious Cullen twins, Edward an...
