Killer Website

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by PieceReviewer

Dedicated to Sejuru

by PieceReviewer

Story's Link: http://www.wattpad.com/32991450-killer-website

Profile Link of the author: http://www.wattpad.com/user/Sejuru

Brief Summary: It has no description.

Three words: adventure, mystery, thriller

Reviews:

Hi Miss Sejuru! Thank you for choosing me as your critique for your story "Killer Website". Di na ako mag-e-english, mahirap mag-explain tsaka ma-wrong grammar pa ako. XD

Hindi ko alam kung may bad comments or good comments ako na mailalagay dito. Basta, ito lang ang review ko.

Title. Pinaghandaang mabuti para sakin. It may sound a little bit cliche pero it brings out the curiousity in you. Kasi ako, nung nakita ko yan, unang pumasok sa isip ko: Ay, ano kaya itong Killer Website na ito? Anmeron dito? like that. And straight ang dating niya, alam na agad kung ano yung content nung story.

Prologue. One word to describe, captivating. Basta, nakakahatak atensyon.

Story. Medyo cliche na siya, kasi of course, like any other stories I've read or watched, si bida at si supporting chara/sidekick or kung ano pa tawag sakanila ang naturang naliligtas sa mga survival thingy na yan. Sila parati yung nabubuhay or kahit nasa bingit na ng kamatayan, naililigtas pa. But, I think sa mga survival genres ganyan naman talaga.

Yung story, I must say, parang hango siya sa story na Hunger Games. Patay kung patay, ligtas kung ligtas. And idagdag natin yung fact na si Cirin ay archer, katulad nung bidang babae sa Hunger Games na si Katniss, archer din. :D

Setting. Perfect sa story. Tamang-tama na ilagay sa makabago at puno ng teknolohiya na panahon.

Time. Tama lang ang flow of time ng story, normal na sa umpisa palang, dun na magsisimula.

I will not question kung bakit na-establish ang Nissassabase.com at bakit sila pumapatay, dahil alam ko na parte yun ng thrill sa story mo. Kumbaga the pre-climax. :)))))

If I were to describe this story, this is unique and captivating. Hindi man ako mahilig sa survival genres, I must say, must read at worth reading ang story na ito. Nakaka-excite, you'll never know what'll happen next.

I expect na maganda at parehas tayo ng iniisip kong maging ending. (Pag nasa bandang climax na) Well, expect ko talaga na magiging maganda yan dahil na rin sa iba mong mga story which are also worth reading.

Overall, maganda, challenging, nakaka-curious in many ways. :)))))

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