Ok get ready for chapter 1....btw this is my first book so give me advice. Anyway above is a freind of mine so check her out.....also thanks to oblivious egger and viper's the flareon's gaming!
Ash's Pov
Stunned! I take in all of lumiose citys wonders! "Woah" I shout in awe "This place is awesome...I could get used to bring here!" "So do you like it?" My mum asks. "Definitely!" "Good sweetie"
We swoop round prismtower and I see many new pokemon which I look forward to catch."pikachu which pokemon do you think we should befreind first?" "Pik Pikachu!" He replys meaning 'all of them', I giggle.
50 minutes later we arrive at our new home: a two story upper middle class home worth around 47,000, I immediately check out my new room. As I walk through I immediately notice all the space I have to my self, I feel as if a bomb goes off in my head as I am stunned at this amazing house although I have ownly seen a small sector of it. I continue to examine the rest of this wonderful home and imagine all what I can do.
After an hour or two I go back up to my bedroom and look out of the window. I see a wonderful skyline of lumiose city despite being a walk of around 10-15 minutes, as I lower my head further and further down towards the ground below, I then spot a boy of similar age to mine and contemplate talking to him. In the end I grab pikachu and run down stairs. "Bye mum, be back soon" "I'm sweetee".
I run outdoors quickly towards the boy. In my head I think about what he could be like and how I should act.
"Hi" I say trying not to sound anxious
"Hey...." he replys...the air is filled with silence as no one speals for several moments;"so the names Ash Ketchum, I'm pallet down in the Panto region "I say trying to get him to speak "....Strange........"There is a long pause "Strange what do you mean?"
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Erm......well actually....I'm from pallet town....well my dad is anyway " I would investigate about him further but I could tell it's a sour subject so I don't...."Cool"I reply, "anyway call me Red "he says with a grin "Ok .... so are we freinds? "I ask hoping for him to reply to with a yes, "Definitely, I feel a sort of connection to you" red says with a puzzled expression as if he was trying to solve a mystery- that probably trying to think of s possible connection to us... "Strangely, I feel as if we have a connection also"...to be honest I do have a small feeling though I mostly say that to be a good freind . "Hey...so ash...want to hangout later?" "Well actually i could probably now..." "No ash you should probably just go and help your mum and dad unpack...and maybe get some food" "erm ...ok red...I'm help my mum"
Red's Pov
"Wait....did i just...erm sorry ash, I never knew"..I'm an idiot....!
"Erm ...its ok red" he replys probably feeling guitly "oh ok....sorry again" I don't ask more because I know how sensitive the topic is. "Any Way...I have some unfinished buiness anyway so...I'll just meet you here a bit later" "Ok" he replys
Ash's Pov
"Ok" I reply without asking further questions as it sounds personal...is this him going to murder someone, has he inherited a business of his dad...? I ask all these questions
Me and Red exchange numbers then we head off in different directions.
Ok so how did I do? Sorry if you think it's too short... tell me how I did in the comments.
Btw I will hopefully have the next chapter up between tonight and thursday.
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