JudyXNick New Family

(Rewritten) Will it be okay

It was the early morning, and a short time before work.Nick and Judy stopped at their favorite cafe .

"Hey carrots. The usual right," Nick guessed as he smirked at me?

Judy playfully rolled her eyes and lovingly sighed, "Yes, sweetheart."

Nick left Judy's side to stand in line for what they believed was the best tasting coffee and donuts. Judy had decided to take a seat by the large window where the view of the city is small but amazing, like the Zootopia fountain across the street. In Judy's mind, her joyful thoughts swarm and make her happy. Her eyes started to gaze at the beautiful diamond engagement ring on her left-paw. Judy thought that all was good until... SMACK! Judy face-paws herself! she fusses in a whisper, "oh cheese and crackers!" I forgot to tell mom and dad about my engagement!

Judy's family had long accepted the idea of her dating a fox. However, Judy was worried about her family's approval about an engagement, which seemed unpredictable after the "Predators Gone Savage" article three years ago. On top of that, since the proposal two months ago, she hadn't contacted anybody at all. Judy is now worried as she remains dazed at the ring.

As Nick paid for Judy's and his coffee he noticed his fiance, who is sitting by the window right before she smacked herself in the face. Nick quickly finished things at the counter and made a beeline toward Judy. He sat in front of her while she was in a daze.

Nick ponders what to say for a second, then asks, " Ah, Carrots. What's the matter? You got your tail stuck in the chair again?"

Judy snapped back to reality, "Oh! Nick...um."

Nick became more concerned with that response. He expected a wittier side from her.

"I'm sorry -ugh... I just remembered that I..." reluctant to tell Nick, Judy spluttered her words.

"And, what would that be, fluff," Nick asks, taking a sympathetic approach.

"Nick, it has been two months since we've been engaged. Within that time, I have been so wrapped up in all of our happiness that I completely forgot to... to tell my parents about it." Judy's eyes squeezed together. "D-Do you think my parents will be okay with this -us getting married?"

Understanding the concern in her voice, Nick took Judy's paw and gently smiled at her, Almost lost in her amethyst eyes, "Judy... there is nothing you should be worked up about, If they can get around to the idea that you are with me, who's to say they won't be alright with the idea that you're marrying the same guy?"

Judy softly giggles at the thought. "Yeah...your right." she said with reassurance in her voice.

Nick took noticed of her squeezing his paw letting him know she felt better, but then noticed the time on his watch oh shoot we better get going he said with a little bit of sadness in my voice. As Nick get up from his seat Judy gets in front of him then pulls him down by his tie. Before Nick could react her lips met his but without hesitating he kissed her back, she then broke the kiss "I know how you feel my sly fox," I wish we had more time too but, we have a job to do. A big smile was on Nick's face, "yes ma'am" he as they headed to their car.

so tell me guys and gals how do you all fell about this rewritten chapter let me know what you think of this version. I've said before that I was going back and clean up the chapters so I'm true of my word on that. As much as I want to do it all at once I rather keep moving forward with my story because like you I can't wait to see what happens next. So whenever I get another chance I will rewrite the other chapter .

Hey guys I know it was short I was just in a rush to get it out here i hope you guys like it but don't worry I'm going to try to make the next one longer I've already started prewrite it out soooooooooo look forward to it hope you will enjoy my story see you soon