(Rewritten)Unnatural

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"Mom... Dad..." Judy built up her courage, took Nick's paw for support, and confessed, "Two months ago, something amazing happened to us and... That is," She flashes her left paw bedazzled with a gorgeous ring. "We're engaged."

"ENGAGED!!!" Everyone bellowed over the clouds.

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"Sweet cheese and crackers," Stu exhaled, shaking his head and paws on his hips.

"Oh, my!" Bonnie is drawn to the ring. "Would you look at that!" Bonnie's big smile appeared on her face.

"Isn't it beautiful," Judy kindly swooned, gazing at the ring as well.

Nick placed his paws on Judy's shoulders. "Not as beautiful as you, Judy," Nick complimented, kissing her paw.

Judy shows a loving smile at him and then look at her parents. "Well," She shyly swipe her ear away like hair and cleared her throat. "What do guys think? No! How do you guys feel about this." She winced with her fists up.

Bonnie relaxed a paw on her chest and kindly sucked her tongue. "Oh, my Bun-Bun. Nick has shown us that he can provide you with a happy and long life, always protecting you. You were always partners. And that," Bonnie poked Judy's nose, "Is good enough for me." She pulled the couple in for warm and loving embrace. "Oh, my babies are getting married. I'm going to cry, Stu!"

"Yeah, yeah. I guess all is well." Stu smiled at the two.

"Oh, dad!" Judy hugged him.

"Thank you, sir." Nick grinned also.

Jack pulled on his ears. "What in the actual hell?" He grumbled under his breath. "Mrs. Hopps, you're not seriously okay with her being with this fox, are you," he exclaimed, gesturing towards Nick?!

Nick slipped Jack's glasses out of his suit pocket and put them on. "This FOX has a name." He devilishly grinned.
Jack glared at him then swiped his glasses back from Nick. He snatched out a handkerchief to clean them. With annoyance, he calmly says, "If I cared about you thriving, untrustworthy, lowlife..."

"You live on stereotypes, don't you?" Judy practically damned him with her tone, while pinching the bridge of her nose in frustration.

"Can't you see this is UNNATURAL," Jack shouted at Judy?!

"UNNATURAL!! Raise your voice at me again and you will have a rude awakening," She snapped! "You won't like it when this bunny gets angry!"

Nick shrugged off the insult, composed himself and - with cool steaming off his smirk, deflected, "You mean how unnatural it is for you to have a pillow with my fiancée on it?"

Jack jerks back. "What?! How did you-!"

Nick pointed at Jack's sport car with the pillow in the back seat. Jack was steaming with rage because his stupid butler put it in his car!

"Ok, buddy, I think it's time for you to take a hike," Nick joked, pointing in the direction over his shoulder.

"You should leave! it's clear that you are up to no good like any other slick Rick of your kind!"

Nick hated that his name rhymed with Rick.

"What is it that you want from my poor, naïve Judy, Fiend?" Jack grimaced. He challenged Nick by standing so close he could kiss the guy.

The two fell quiet. Jack and Nick glowered each other down. Judy, lost in her incense, burning away all her respect for Jack after seeing the way he had treated Nick so far. Burning away the little left over feeling she could have had after realizing how long he remained the same old, stereotypical, narrow-minded fool. He is no more than a prejudice ass.

"Stu, honey, please, would you step in here," she requested with a nudge to his side.

"Oh! Ah, Yes. It's definitely time I intervene." Stu puffed his chest and cleared his throat. In a pretend deep voice, he said, "Alright! That's enough! All of you calm down." He managed to catch all three of their attention. Stu sucked in a big whiff of air. "Now, Bonnie, why don't you take Judy and Jack inside for some carrot tea. And, Nick, as soon as your done bringing in Judy's and your bags come find me out in field. You and I are going to have a talk about this whole ball game."

Nick tensed up for a second. His eyes flickered down while he breathed out, "Yes, sir. Of course."

Stu crunched the grass all the way to the fields.

Well then! How about that tea, huh," Bonnie beamed, nodding her head with a nervously adorable grin.

Judy glared at Jack. She brushed past, hurting his ego again, and snatch Nick to follow on the way to the house.

A few moments later in Judy's old bedroom.

"I can't believe what an asshole he still is," she said, still annoyed about the incident from earlier.

"Carrots," Nick tried calling for her attention.

"I mean, he doesn't even know you. How dare he think that he has the right to talk to you like that and calling me naive! It... really makes me so... livid... I could just - just..." Judy burst into a wrathful rant.

"Eh, Carrots..."

Judy continued to ramble.

"Caaarrots," Nick lovingly sang.

Judy still continued to ramble.

Nick sighed, "Okay. That's tears it."

Judy's constant rant was shut up by Nick enticing kiss. Judy's ears perked up. The sound of the muffled moans melted Judy's pent-up rage. Nick broke from the kiss. Judy noticed they were on the bed, Nick between her legs. At least, their clothes were still on, which kind of didn't satisfy her.

"Feeling better, Fluff," he caressed Judy with his voice and hand, swooning her until she forgot all about Jack.

She looked into Nick's eyes, bewitch and with a big smile upon her face. "What was I upset about?"

Nick chuckled, "You were upset? I hadn't even noticed."

Judy giggled, "Oh, shut up." After sighing in ecstasy, she rubbed Nicks chest with her paws. "I'm so sorry about Jack's attitude back there."

"Hey, 'never let them see they get to you,.' It means no worries for the rest of your daaays," Nick wittily sang as he caressed her cheek.

Judy cracked up, "Yep! That's your motto. Or... should I say our motto," she asked, looking into his eyes.

Nick kissed her forehead, "It is if you sing with me..."

"Seriously?"

"Yes, it's our motto." He takes a deep breath, eyes closed, forehead rested upon hers. "Oh, right. It's time I go have a chat with your father. I'll be in the field."

"Right," she mumbled.

Nick stood up and headed for the door.
Judy quickly reached out to him. "Just remember what I said in the car. No matter what anyone says or how they feel about us... I was the one who said 'yes' to you and love you much more than you know." She rushed to kiss his cheek.

Nick kissed her lips. "Sly bunny."

"Dumb fox." Judy grinned

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