honestly this chapter made me die laughing when i wrote it in my notes. (but then again i appreciate my jokes more than other people so whoops)
"my caramel skin complimented my blueberry eyes and chocolatey brown curls. i applied a plum lipstick to my bubblegum pink lips and slipped on a pair of lime green shoes."
like dang are you a children's birthday cake?? or a regular human being because you're flashing all these mixed signals at me fam
i understand using those words every once and a while, but you are describing her as if you're gonna put her on a dessert menu.
just saying. i mean, i don't describe my characters like this:
"i put on a ketchup colored lipstick and put on a lettuce colored sweater that matched my bread colored skin. my pants were yellow like cheese and my converse were as white as a sesame seed."
sorry, but i ordered a trendy mid-20's girl, not a big mac.
and you may think i'm lying, but i see this all the time. and it's BAD.
that's it.
(I KNOW that this chapter is one day late but i had a little accident with some boiling water and i had to go get it checked out. but, everything is okay. it was a second-degree burn and i have to wait a few weeks for it to heal. love you guys!)
